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Alnaqbi Mohammad Alnaqbi Anastasia J. Khawaja, MS ENC 1101 10-22-2017 Importance of Sustainable Energy for United States 4 trillion kilowatt-hours of electricity generated in the United States during the year 2016. The division of energy production in United States shows major contribution of natural gas i.e. 34% of total energy production, coal comes at the second place with about 30% of energy production, 1% of the energy was produced from petroleum, 5% of overall energy was produced by nuclear and finally 15% energy was produced using renewable energy sources including hydropower, wind power, biomass, solar power, and geothermal energy (Electricity Explained). History of energy in United States is similar to any country in the world. In 1700s, wood was the main source of energy in every domestic as well as corporate sector. After a century, in 1800s, coal become the main source of energy. After the discovery of petroleum sources and natural gas, these sources become the newest addition in energy resources of United States. The commercial use of nuclear power started in the 1950s and began to increase rapidly in the early 1970s when a number of nuclear power plants began working. Since 1995 the amount of energy produced by renewable sources has increased by 15.9% (History of Energy Use in the United States). The reason to discuss the history is to show the willingness of American energy researchers to achieve a state of sustainable energy. From 1700s to 2000s, American researchers have always tried to find resources more efficient and long lasting. The ultimate result was the use of renewable resources to achieve the status of sustainable energy state. In short, by looking at the history of energy in United States, it can be said that scholarly conversation about energy has always remained the same throughout history and with the passage of time scholars will keep struggling for more efficient ways of energy production and consumption. This will ultimately benefit the future generations. One of the main reasons why scholars always supported the idea of evolution is the environmental protection. According to Ismail Bozkurt a researcher at Marmara University Turkey “The World Energy Committee states that there exists no risk-free energy resource and Alnaqbi for this reason, while choosing the energy resources, cost factors must be considered with environmental effects” (327). He further stated that pollution of air is caused by elements such as Carbon dioxide, sulfur dioxide and mercury. These particles are emitted during the combustion process of coal, natural gas, and petroleum. By taking a look at US energy production, most of the energy production is by using these resources. This was the reason why US scholars focused on sustainable and renewable energy resources. Similar to the above-mentioned suggestion, another environmental researcher Amir Hosein supported the idea of green house energy production. Opposite to other ideas, this idea suggests the production of energy on household level. People can generate their own energy by using solar panels, water energy, or thermal energy. The benefit of green energy on small level is the production of energy with a very little cost (15). The practical implementa tion of this model is present in some Indian villages in South Asia. According the article of Amit Jain presented in International Conference on Power System Technology “Many villages in India are remotely located and their connectivity with the grid is very difficult resulting in their being not electrified at all or lack of continuous supply. The solution to this problem was the generation of energy on local level” (1). This example showed that if a developing state like India can implement such model US can do this more easily. In addition to both these scholars, some other scholars suggested some innovative ways to utilize resources that we use in daily life for the production of energy. The use of eco labeling and recycling products for the production of energy is another important dimension in achieving the status of a country with sustainable energy. This is simple, as long as products will use eco labels, people will know that they’re buying something productive and later on these products can be used in generating energy (Benerjee, 58). By taking a look at previous ideas and this one, it is clear that scholars totally support the idea of sustainable energy the only difference is the difference of resources suggested by the scholars. Currently 15% of energy production in US is from renewable sources, this percentage needs to be increased, only then US will able to generate sustainable energy. In conclusion, since the independence of United States, government has tried their best to keep energy production more efficient and sustainable but the future demands the type of energy where future generations can have enough energy to spend. In all this struggle, scholarly Alnaqbi conversation has never changed. Scholars have always talked about energy sources that will benefit present and future generations with less cost. By analyzing the current situation, it is safe to say that the conversation will remain the same for a long time. Alnaqbi Work Cited Banerjee, A., & Solomon, B. D. (2003). Eco-labeling for energy efficiency and sustainability: a meta-evaluation of US programs. Energy Policy, 31(2), 109-123. Hosein, Amir, Dahlan, N. D., Berardi, U., GhaffarianHoseini, A., Makaremi, N., & Ghaffarian, Hoseini, M. (2003). Sustainable energy performances of green buildings: A review of current theories, implementations and challenges. Renewable and Sustainable Energy Reviews, 25, 1-17. “Energy explained”. US Energy Information Administration. n.d. Web. October 13, 2017. https://www.eia.gov/tools/faqs/faq.php?id=427&t=3. History of Energy Use in the United States. Geology.com. n.d. Web Accessed October 21, 2017. http://geology.com/articles/history-of-energy-use/. Bozkurt, Ismail. Energy Resources and Their Effects on Environment. 2010. PDF. WSEAS TRANSACTIONS on ENVIRONMENT and DEVELOPMENT. ISSN: 1790-5079. Jain, Amit. Sustainable Energy Plan for an Indian Village. 2010. PDF. 2010 International Conference on Power System Technology. Importance of Sustainable Energy for United States 4 trillion kilowatt-hours of electricity generated in the United States during the year 2016. The division of energy production in United States shows major contribution of natural gas i.e. 34% of total energy production, coal comes at the second place with about 30% of energy production, 1% of the energy was produced from petroleum, 5% of overall energy was produced by nuclear and finally 15% energy was produced using renewable energy sources including hydropower, wind power, biomass, solar power, and geothermal energy (Electricity Explained). History of energy in United States is similar to any country in the world. In 1700s, wood was the main source of energy in every domestic as well as corporate sector. After a century, in 1800s, coal become the main source of energy. After the discovery of petroleum sources and natural gas, these sources become the newest addition in energy resources of United States. The commercial use of nuclear power started in the 1950s and began to increase rapidly in the early 1970s when a number of nuclear power plants began working. Since 1995 the amount of energy produced by renewable sources has increased by 15.9% (History of Energy Use in the United States). The reason to discuss the history is to show the willingness of American energy researchers to achieve a state of sustainable energy. From 1700s to 2000s, American researchers have always tried to find resources more efficient and long lasting. The ultimate result was the use of renewable resources to achieve the status of sustainable energy state. In short, by looking at the history of energy in United States, it can be said that scholarly conversation about energy has always remained the same throughout history and with the passage of time scholars will keep struggling for more efficient ways of energy production and consumption. This will ultimately benefit the future generations. One of the main reasons why scholars always supported the idea of evolution is the environmental protection. According to Ismail Bozkurt a researcher at Marmara University Turkey “The World Energy Committee states that there exists no risk-free energy resource and for this reason, while choosing the energy resources, cost factors must be considered with environmental effects” (327). He further stated that pollution of air is caused by elements such as Carbon dioxide, sulfur dioxide and mercury. These particles are emitted during the combustion process of coal, natural gas, and petroleum. By taking a look at US energy production, most of the energy production is by using these resources. This was the reason why US scholars focused on sustainable and renewable energy resources. Similar to the above-mentioned suggestion, another environmental researcher Amir Hosein supported the idea of green house energy production. Opposite to other ideas, this idea suggests the production of energy on household level. People can generate their own energy by using solar panels, water energy, or thermal energy. The benefit of green energy on small level is the production of energy with a very little cost (15). The practical implementation of this model is present in some Indian villages in South Asia. According the article of Amit Jain presented in International Conference on Power System Technology “Many villages in India are remotely located and their connectivity with the grid is very difficult resulting in their being not electrified at all or lack of continuous supply. The solution to this problem was the generation of energy on local level” (1). This example showed that if a developing state like India can implement such model US can do this more easily. In addition to both these scholars, some other scholars suggested some innovative ways to utilize resources that we use in daily life for the production of energy. The use of eco labeling and recycling products for the production of energy is another important dimension in achieving the status of a country with sustainable energy. This is simple, as long as products will use eco labels, people will know that they’re buying something productive and later on these products can be used in generating energy (Benerjee, 58). By taking a look at previous ideas and this one, it is clear that scholars totally support the idea of sustainable energy the only difference is the difference of resources suggested by the scholars. Currently 15% of energy production in US is from renewable sources, this percentage needs to be increased, only then US will able to generate sustainable energy. In conclusion, since the independence of United States, government has tried their best to keep energy production more efficient and sustainable but the future demands the type of energy where future generations can have enough energy to spend. In all this struggle, scholarly conversation has never changed. Scholars have always talked about energy sources that will benefit present and future generations with less cost. By analyzing the current situation, it is safe to say that the conversation will remain the same for a long time. Work Cited Banerjee, A., & Solomon, B. D. (2003). Eco-labeling for energy efficiency and sustainability: a meta-evaluation of US programs. Energy Policy, 31(2), 109-123. Hosein, Amir, Dahlan, N. D., Berardi, U., GhaffarianHoseini, A., Makaremi, N., & Ghaffarian, Hoseini, M. (2003). Sustainable energy performances of green buildings: A review of current theories, implementations and challenges. Renewable and Sustainable Energy Reviews, 25, 1-17. “Energy explained”. US Energy Information Administration. n.d. Web. October 13, 2017. https://www.eia.gov/tools/faqs/faq.php?id=427&t=3. History of Energy Use in the United States. Geology.com. n.d. Web Accessed October 21, 2017. http://geology.com/articles/history-of-energy-use/. Bozkurt, Ismail. Energy Resources and Their Effects on Environment. 2010. PDF. WSEAS TRANSACTIONS on ENVIRONMENT and DEVELOPMENT. ISSN: 1790-5079. Jain, Amit. Sustainable Energy Plan for an Indian Village. 2010. PDF. 2010 International Conference on Power System Technology. MY instructor feedback besides pdf file I upload ANALYSIS Make sure you focus on why you use sources - just state the information which comes from it. Think of the articles as tools in order to back up your discussion about how your topic has shifted in terms of the conversation. ORGANIZATION While you do not take a stance, make sure your body paragraphs are not focused around one source - your body paragraphs need to be focused around an idea. 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Importance of Sustainable Energy for the United States
According to the US Energy Information Administration, four trillion kilowatt-hours of
electricity was generated in the United States during the year 2016. The division of energy
production in the United States shows that the major source of energy was natural gas
contributing 34% of total energy production. Coal comes second place contributing about 30% of
energy produced. 1% of the energy was produced from petroleum while nuclear reactions
produced 5% of overall energy and finally, 15% energy was produced using renewable energy
sources including hydropower, wind power, biomass, solar power, and geothermal energy.
The United States’ history of energy in is similar to that of any country. However, history
shows that the United States has always been willing over the years to achieve sustainable
energy. In the 1700s, wood was the main source of energy in every domestic as well as corporate
sector. After a century, in the 1800s, coal become the main source of energy. After the discovery
of petroleum sources and natural gas, these sources become the newest addition to the energy
resources of the United States. I...


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