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1 Formatting, Majid Aljohani Times New Roman Double spaced 1 inch margins 12 Pt. font. Nada Conhadzic CIE 077 Writing 20 October 2017 Who I Admire menangan ness Patient and kind are my favorite traits of my beloved father, Fahad Awad Aljohani. My father is very smart and very well educated. He is an architect. I admire his beautiful buildings and his business skills. My father is also a very fine father. He is kind, understanding and he gives each of his children, great opportunity to learn. I admire him because my father is a generous man and an accomplished hard working man. > I admire my father's generosity. My father values education. It is very expensive for my two brother's and I to study in America. But he values education so much that he has made it possible for each of the three of us to study in the USA. He never complains; he always supports. He asks questions about our classes and how we are each doing individually. He sends money regularly for our comfortable off topic. living. He really cares about all of us. He wants us to do well in school and in life. In addition, another example of my father's compassion, kindness and generosity is his a seperate idea. by seperate frequent giving to the poor of Jeddah. He does not tell us of 7. his generosity. My brothers and I have witnessed his giving food and rent to others. He does this without comment. My father is an accomplished as a hard working architect. He had designed many buildings in Jeddah, Saudi Arabia. He has also been contracted to be the architect of buildings in China. He is well respected for his designs and completion of his work. He enjoys his work. Currently he is designing office buildings for different businesses and such! as companies. He seems happy with his work. I am very proud of him. In conclusion, my father, Fahad Awad Aljohani, is a man to be admired. He is a generous man. My father gives ro his all for his family. My father is kind to others. My father is a successful architect. He has worked very hard during his life. I greatly respect him. I am also thankful he is my father and I love him. second you to do a 13 I would like draft. 25 1. Formatting 2. Avoid the overuse of simple sentences. The writting becomes enoppy and fragmented . 3. Edit out the overuse of I and my father (, these words repeat too often. 4. unity. Make sure that each of your paragraphs have only 1 main idea. - buildings in China. He is well respected for his designs and completion of his work. He enjoys his work. Currently he is designing office buildings for different businesses and SUCH as: companies. He seems happy with his work. I am very proud of him. In conclusion, my father, Fahad Awad Aljohani, is a man to be admired. He is a generous man. My father gives to his all for his family. My father is kind to others. My father is a successful architect. He has worked very hard during his life. I greatly respect him. I am also thankful he is my father and I love him. you to do a to a second 13 I I would like draft. 25 1. Formatting 2. Avoid the overuse of simple sentences. The writting becomes choppy and fragmented. 3. Edit out the overuse of I and my father C, these words prepeat too often. 4. unity. Make sure that each of your paragraphs have only 1 main idea. > 5. Provide more specific examples. " Maybe describe your Rather's educational background Some of the projects he now worked on. Re-submit within 1 week please.
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Majid Aljohani
Nada Conhadzic
CIE 077 Writing
20 October 2017
Who I admire
Patience and kindness are my favorites from my beloved father, Fahad Awad Aljohani.
My father is a very smart person and also well educated. He is a qualified architect to whom I
like his building designs thanks to his advanced business and artistic skills. He is good to me as
he always finds time to catch up and support me in my interests. He gives me and my other
sibling quality time and support to learn and grow to become better. I value hi...


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