Camparison Essay ( IOS and Android)

User Generated

verar78

Writing

Description

Plz read the directions carefully which the first document I uploaded.

Use the informations, details and the type of structure in the second document I uploaded.

If there any questions plz let me know as soon as possible.

Unformatted Attachment Preview

ASSIGNMENT: COMPARISON ESSAY First draft due – November 13, 2017 Write a 4--page comparison essay (first draft) that examines the similarities (compares) and/or differences (contrasts) between two things in order to make a point. The similarities and differences should lead to a convincing conclusion. This is an important feature in a comparison and contrast essay. Remember, it is not simply a list of similarities and differences; it establishes an opinion about two items and compares and contrasts them to support that opinion. Topic: You must complete the topic proposal worksheet about the two subjects you plan to compare. Use at least 2-3 outside sources to practice correct formatting of in-text citations and works cited page. Structure/Organization: Choose one: Point-by-point method or Block method. Point-by-point Block Introductory paragraph Thesis statement Introductory paragraph Thesis statement Topic sentence, point 1 Subject 1 Subject 2 Topic sentence, point 2 Subject 1 Subject 2 Topic sentence, point 3 Subject 1 Subject 2 Concluding statement Concluding paragraph Topic sentence, subject 1 Point 1 Point 2 Point 3 Topic sentence, subject 2 Point 1 Point 2 Point 3 Your paper can have as many paragraphs as necessary Concluding statement Concluding paragraph REMINDERS: Your essay will include these elements of a comparison essay: • Introduction: Remember to have a hook, and be sure to provide enough background information in your introduction so that your reader will be ready to understand both of your subjects. • Thesis statement: This will be the last sentence in your introduction that gives the reader an overview about what you will discuss in your paper. Be sure that your thesis statement includes language that indicates comparing or contrasting. Examples: The differences between urban living and rural living with regard to the degree of friendliness between residents, the pace of life, and the variety of available activities, make urban living a more convenient choice. // Japanese cars are better than their American counterparts because of their durability, variety, and comfort. • Body paragraphs: Each body paragraph will have a topic sentence that relates to the thesis. As you can see from the essay organization above, you have choices for organizing your paragraphs. Your paper can have as many paragraphs as needed. Whichever style you use, be sure to include transition words in your paragraphs to guide your reader from one idea to the next (In addition; For example, etc.) and to show a similar or contrasting relationship between ideas. Examples: Comparison Transitions One similarity, Another similarity, Like, Both, also, in the same way, likewise, similarly ➢ Contrast Transitions although, and yet, at the same time, despite that, even so, even though, for all that, however, in contrast, in spite of, instead, nevertheless, on the contrary, on the other hand, otherwise, regardless, still, though, yet NOTE: Do not use the transition signals and, but and however more than 2 times each. Vary your vocabulary throughout your paper using the new signal words you’ve learned. • Give specific examples: Finding concrete specific examples does not require a huge vocabulary or a vivid imagination, but it does require the willingness to recall what you already know. If you really can't find any examples or specifics to support your thesis or general conclusion, you should probably change your topic. Try to gather as many specific details in the prewriting steps of brainstorming and outlining. If you have many concrete specifics at hand before you begin your draft, you're more likely to think and write more easily and accurately about your topic. • Concluding statement: This is the first sentence in your concluding paragraph. Here, you will provide your analysis and form your conclusion/opinion based on the information you presented about your two subjects. o • What convincing conclusion can you draw from the supporting examples regarding your two subjects? How does one weigh against the other? Example: In conclusion, it is evident that the differences between smartphones and flip-phones clearly make the smartphone the smarter choice. (Then, continue with the rest of the concluding paragraph.) Concluding paragraph: Your concluding paragraph is part of your analysis of your subjects and should not introduce any new information. Support your concluding statement by summarizing the main points in your paper. Things to keep in mind: • Point of View: For an academic comparison essay, your discussion should be in the 3rd person. • Compare/Contrast relationship words: Use words indicating a similar or contrasting relationship between ideas. (See also above chart, the textbook, and pp. 116-117/ 119-120 in Writing Academic English.) • Transition signals: Each body paragraph should begin with a transitional expression. They link your paragraphs together, thus giving your paper coherence. Although you can use transitional expressions wherever needed in your essay, they are imperative (A MUST) in your topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph. This connects one paragraph to the other. Example: One important difference is… Another difference is… (See additional example transitions in “Not as Different as You Think.”) • MLA Format: Heading; header; title centered; double-spaced; 12 pt. font; first line of each paragraph indented (using the TAB key on your keyboard). • Grammar: Use the feedback from your previous essay to get an idea about where your strengths and weaknesses lie in basic grammar, such as sentence fragments, word forms, verb tense, subject-verb agreement, etc. Be sure to check for these carefully as you write your draft. cement) more likes plus system Subject 1 1st point of comparison o Detail o Detail 2nd point of comparison o Detail o Detail 3rd point of comparison o Detail Topic Sentence to tos un Tent 1st: Open source. Any kind largeauge is accepthle . Dangerous ! 2nd: Application for AN free unmanged cracker version - 3rd: Custon Alarker. -Gry - htc - Sungunya o Detail They teg sture cilili forst. Subject 2 1st point of comparison o Detail Detail O Topic Sentence people teel 1ste closed source. only apphe's own Sate ! V 2nd Application. paid. official 3 nd: Custon Cuiten Marken Apple only . - stable 2nd point of comparison o Detail o Detail 3rd point of comparison o Detail Gerine. O Detail
Purchase answer to see full attachment
User generated content is uploaded by users for the purposes of learning and should be used following Studypool's honor code & terms of service.

Explanation & Answer

Good luck in your study and if you need any further help in your assignments, please let me know.Goodbye.

Surname: 1
Name:
Title:
Professor’s Name:
Date:
IOS versus Android
Introduction
IPhone operating system (IOS) and Android are prominent mobile operating systems. Google
established the Android operating system (OS), and it's based on Linux Kernel, and currently,
it’s designed for touchscreen mobile devices like tablets and smartphones (Skokienet). The first
commercial Android device was established in September 2008, and Android application can be
downloaded from the Google play store which contains over 2.7 million applications as from
February 2017 (Skokienet). Since 2013, Android has been the best-selling OS on smartphones
and tablets. On the other hand, the IOS is a mobile operating system established by Apple Inc.
this OS is being used by many organization’s mobile devices like iPod touch, iPad and iPhone.
IOS is the second most prominent mobile OS in the world after the android system. The two
operating systems are in competing positions as they are best-ranged OS in the current market.
Therefore, these two operating systems can be distinguished in terms of their differences and
similarities (Skokienet). For instance, both OS have similar features, they both share the same
history of their co-founders, and they aim to make communication easier. However, the two OS
are different when it comes to their costs, system and prominence.
Topic sentence 1: Both Android and...


Anonymous
I was stuck on this subject and a friend recommended Studypool. I'm so glad I checked it out!

Studypool
4.7
Trustpilot
4.5
Sitejabber
4.4

Similar Content

Related Tags