Rewrite Proposal Critique

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Description

In this assignment you will be rewriting and critiquing the proposal provided . Please see ATTACHED . There are at least six improvements to be made in the document. Your job is to identify the six improvements and then, using track changes, rewrite or fix the error. Also, using the comments tool, give a brief explanation to why it is wrong and why you fixed it the way you did. Note: If your word processing program does not have track changes, you will need to insert comments in brackets using red font at the improvement location.

In your document, you should:

  1. Identify at least six proposal weaknesses using track changes.
  2. Include a critique paragraph of at least 150 words at the end of the document.
  3. Discuss improvements for each of the weaknesses in your critique.
  4. Ensure both the comments and critique are concise and error-free.


Your assignment must follow these formatting requirements:

  • Be typed, double spaced, using Times New Roman font (size 12), with one-inch margins on all sides; references must follow APA or school-specific format. Check with your professor for any additional instructions.
  • Include a cover page containing the title of the assignment, the student’s name, the professor’s name, the course title, and the date. The cover page and the reference page are not included in the required page length.


The specific course learning outcomes associated with this assignment are:

  • Outline the strengths and opportunities for improvement of all communications.
  • Revise draft documents to improve audience comprehension.
  • Employ correct Edited Standard Written English (ESWE).
  • Prepare proposals for technical products and/or services.
  • Use technology and information resources to research issues in technical writing.
  • Write clearly and concisely about technical writing using proper writing mechanics.


Grading for this assignment will be based on answer quality, logic/organization of the paper, and language and writing skills, using the following rubric.

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Explanation & Answer

Here is the final answer

Running head: proposal

Proposal for Plant Service
First Last Name
Name of organization
Date

Plant service proposal

2

(To, from, date and subject have been removed. They should not be included in the
proposal)
(The title ‘A proposal’ was removed since this only appears on the title page with a clear
definition of what the proposal is about in the title)

Background
(A project proposal should start with a background. The part was omitted, heading
directly to the definition of the problem)
First impression sets the pace for the following interaction between two people, a person and
a situation or a person and a place. It is important that receptions are well organized to
accommodate proper first impressions. The way a client views an entire organization stems
solely from its reception. Most organizations forget that they need to make a first impression
and their reception is the way to do this (Brill et al. 1984). They thus experience detrimental
customer satisfaction and returns. However, those who can identify that they need to impress
their clients from the very beginning have an edge over the rest.
One of the ways that the interior of a company can be decorated is using plants. One of the
companies that offer such services for interior design of households and organization is
Green Thumb planting. Having worked in the interior plant maintenance business for 32
years and owned and operated Green Thumb Planting for the last seven years, it is safe to
conclude their services are the best in the country. (The proposal should not be written in
first person) A...


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