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please help me check the grammar for the file in attachment
1. grammar
2. sentence structure
3. comma, period problem
teacher said around 30-40 mistake, please help me try to find as many as possible
please use red font color to make changes of what you changed!
thank you!
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In Chapter One, Tyler focused on the question "What educational purpose should the
school seek to attain." In my opinion, his sources are exhaustive because he divided his
ideas of the sources into two broad parts: the origins of the educational purpose and the
basis for selecting the educational mission.
The origins of the educations purpose contain the studies of learners, the contemporary
life outside the school and the suggestion from subject specialists. From the learner's
point of view, the educational purpose would be fit with their physical, social and
integrative needs. The school want...