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I wrote an ARGUMENTATIVE essay and I need to edit it and to add counter paragraph and citing. I have some of the fixation. The essay should be in a THIRD PERSON writing and to be in MLA format. IT WORTH 100 POINTS. Basically you will: 1.edit whole essay with me giving you what to add specifically. 2.add counter PARAGRAPH 3. edit my citation and add your citation if you add so. EVERYTHING IS THERE IT'S NOT HARD WORK !

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Divorce is better than living in an unhappy marriage for the sake of children
Despite available estimates showing that at least 90% of all adults in America get married
before reaching the age of 50, it is shocking that about 40-50% of these marriages end up in
divorce (Anderson). From this statistics, it is clear that it is better to get a divorce than to stay in
a dissatisfactory marital relationship just for the sake of children.
The U.S. Census Bureau has established that among all age groups, the rates of divorce
range at around 50% which means that nearly half of the couples in the country end up in divorce
(Wang, Ming‐Te, and Sheikh‐Khalil). Further shocking statistics show that approximately in
every 36 seconds, there is a divorce recorded. The divorce rates can be attributed or linked to the
risks involved with staying in unhappy marital relationships and the effects, especially
psychological effects that children can suffer due to an unhappy family.
It is better to get a divorce than to stay in a dissatisfactory marital relationship just for the
sake of children. According to a research conducted by Jane Anderson, a renowned scholar of
human psychology, children living with their biological parents lead better lives psychologically
as compared to those who grow up in unhappy families (Anderson). This is evaluated in terms of
their psychological gro...


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