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Those are the feedback from the Professor I wanted you to go review and fixed what she is asking for.
You have a good essay topic in Dickinson’s poem. I would though urge you to develop a clearer sense of purpose about the position you think the author is taking. What is the narrator saying about seclusion and isolation? Make sure that your thesis appears at the end of your introductory paragraph and clearly articulates the main point.
You did a pretty good job with the body paragraphs and your subtopics, though try and keep your paragraphs consistent with the points you raise in your introduction to create a cohesive flow of evidence to support your central purpose. In your fourth paragraph you introduce a new topic when you write about the theme of judgment, and so just be aware that if you want to address this issue, you need to introduce it first to readers in your thesis statement.
Nice job quoting from the literature as an author’s words can be a very powerful source of evidence to support your thesis.
Remember to begin all paragraphs with a clear topic sentence that captures the intent and central purpose of the entire paragraph and that clearly references back to your introduction in evidence.
Nice job with your conclusion, though it would be helpful here to restate the author's thesis as a way to provide a more cohesive essay around the poem’s theme.
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Themes in “This is My Letter to the world”
“This is my letter to the world that never wrote to me” (1) is a rather strong sentence that
draws anticipation from the reader of the poem “This is my letter to the world” by Emily. To the
reader of the poem, the possible questions that come to mind are what could the letter say? And
what world does the poet refer to in the poem? Why does the narrator in the poem feel that the
need to write a letter to the world? By answering the questions, one begins to understand the
world of the poet and one gets to develop a view on the theme of the poem. From the first line of
the poem, there is evidence of the poet’s sense of belonging to a secluded world and also to her
countrymen. In this essay, I would explore the different themes that Emily used in the letter. This
includes, her view of seclusion, the theme of judgement, religion and immortality, the
relationship between religion and faith, the love of nature and her independence in her work.
The letter “This is my Letter to the world” is seen as an expression of the poet’s desire to belong
to a secluded world. Seclusion is a dominant theme in the letter as the poet attempts to find
communion with the nature around her with her generosity and kindness acting as her guide. The
poet says, “The simple news...