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For this assignment you Review classmates essay and complete the peer review form fill in the writer name which is James Lyons and the readers name is Master Muhammad.Provide feedback for all 8 numbers The peer review form and The essay is also attached

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Writer’s Name ___________________ Reader’s Name______________________ Peer Review Worksheet: English 101 Writers: Post your essay as a Microsoft Word document—the file name should have your name, essay name (Essay 3), and a file extension of .doc or .docx, which means a Microsoft Word document. Readers: Download two students’ papers and THIS document. Be sure to read through the entire essay-and THIS peer review workshop sheet-before you begin the critique. Answer the following questions as thoroughly as possible based on your reading of the essay. Type your critique (answers to the questions below) into this document. Make sure to give the writer as much honest feedback as you can; remember that your response may make the difference between a weak paper and a strong one. Next, click reply to the writers’ posts and upload THIS completed document for the writers to review during their revisions. REMEMBER, YOU WILL NEED TO REVIEW TWO DIFFERENT ESSAYS. 1. Write the thesis here: _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 2. Is the thesis direct? Does it appear at the end of the first paragraph? _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 3. Does the thesis effectively answer the question in the prompt? How could the writer improve thesis focus, if necessary? _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 4. Do you get a clear sense what the paragraphs are about through the topic sentences? Write the strongest topic sentence here and state why you think it is strong. _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 5. Write the weakest topic sentence here and state why you think it is weak. _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 6. Regarding the MLA, check the parenthetical citations in the text and the “Works Cited” page. Do these conform to the MLA’s exact specifications? Can you mark the paper accordingly? _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 7. Does the conclusion provide closure, restate the thesis, and summarize the paper? How could the writer make it more effective? _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ 8. Finally, write any suggestions you may have to strengthen the paper that was not covered above. _____________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________
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