Second Draft of the Final Project

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you will prepare your final project's second draft, which will include the Proposal and Communication Plan sections.

Please read this feedback that I got from my instructor, and incorporate the feedback when doing this assignment. The full assignment is in the attachment below. PLEASE READ ALL THE INSTRUCTIONS.

Here is the feedback from my instructor::::: Your first milestone needs improvement in a number of areas. The document was not submitted nor read like a research paper. The scenario data provided requires you to pick a discipline like corrections and then describe a fictional agency based on the data. Using the data come up with a hypothesis. Also, using the data provided for a problem solving model to expand on the theory, strategy, communications. Identity what reference material you will use for the research. Your title page is not formatted to APA. You did not use any subheadings based on the major areas of the rubric. Please review the announcements and the sample papers provided. This will need to be edited for the final project.

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CJ 675 Milestone Two Guidelines and Rubric Overview: For this milestone, you will prepare a second draft of your final project that thoroughly addresses the items listed in the prompt. To complete this assignment, you must complete the textbook reading assigned in Module Seven and review the materials presented in Modules One through Seven. As a criminal justice leader, you will often be faced with making decisions that reflect not only on you but on your department as a whole. We often use tools like statistics and crime trends to offer the best possible route to finding a solution and ultimately making a decision. The field of criminal justice is constantly changing; new laws, policies, and procedures make situational, evidence-based decision making a complicated daily task. And it is nearly impossible to make an informed decision without first researching the issues at play and leveraging the power of available data to determine the right solution for each particular situation and organization. You will assume the role of a leader within a criminal justice organization of your choice. Based on your chosen scenario, you will be presented with a specific challenge that is emblematic of wider issues in contemporary criminal justice. Prompt: Your task for Milestone Two is to complete the Proposal and Communication Plan sections of your final project. You will be given information (including this data set) for your scenario, but you must also conduct your own research on comparable organizations and trends in the field to determine opportunities and external threats. The following critical elements must be specifically addressed: I. Proposal: In this section, present and defend your plan for solving the issue facing your organization. A. Solution: 1. Based on your theoretical framework and your analysis and research, propose a solution that effectively addresses the issue. 2. Illustrate your proposal with the specific steps that the organization would need to take in order to properly execute the solution. 3. Recommend strategic methods that leadership of the organization could apply while effectively implementing your proposed solution. B. Defense: 1. Explain how your solution will improve the situation for both your organization and the community that is affected by the issue. Use specific examples to illustrate. 2. Explain how the data you analyzed and the trends you identified have guided you to this solution. In other words, how did your analysis of the data inform your decision making? Use specific examples to illustrate. 3. Explain how your research led you to this solution. In other words, how did the evidence from your research inform your decision making? Use specific examples to illustrate. II. Communication Plan: In this section, explain how you will disseminate the key ideas of your proposal. A. Determine who the key internal and external audiences for your proposal are, and explain how you would present the information to them. Your communication plan should reflect the best practices in the field, as discussed in your theory and methods section. B. Choose one internal audience and develop a sample communication for them regarding your proposed solution. Be sure that your communication is appropriate for this audience and is aligned with best practices in the field. C. Choose one external audience and develop a sample communication for them regarding your proposed solution. Be sure that your communication is appropriate for this audience and is aligned with best practices in the field. III. References: In this section, cite all of your sources using APA formatting. Guidelines for Submission: Your draft must be a submitted as a 4- to 5-page Microsoft Word document with double spacing, 12-point Times New Roman font, one-inch margins, and sources cited in APA format. Critical Elements Proposal: Solution Proposal: Specific Steps Proposal: Implementing Proposal: Improve Exemplary (100%) Meets “Proficient” criteria and demonstrates creative or insightful application of datadriven decision making to solve contemporary issues Meets “Proficient” criteria and demonstrates creative or insightful application of datadriven decision making to solve contemporary issues Meets “Proficient” criteria and recommendation reflects keen insight into the strategic methods used by leaders in the criminal justice field Meets “Proficient” criteria and demonstrates creative or insightful application of datadriven decision making to solve contemporary issues Proficient (90%) Proposes an effective solution to the problem that is fully supported by the theoretical framework, data, and research Illustrates the proposed solution with specific steps that the organization would need to take in order to properly execute the solution Recommends strategic methods for leadership to use in effectively implementing the solution Defends the likelihood of the solution to substantively improve the situation for the organization and the community using specific examples Needs Improvement (70%) Proposes a solution to the problem, but it is ineffective or not fully supported by the theoretical framework, data, or research Discusses steps for executing the solution, but there are gaps in necessary detail Not Evident (0%) Does not propose a solution to the problem Value 10 Does not discuss the steps for executing the solution 10 Recommends implementation methods for leadership, but fails to recommend strategic methods for effectively implementing the solution Discusses the potential of the solution to improve the situation, but fails to fully defend the solution using specific examples Does not recommend methods for leadership to implement the strategy 10 Does not discuss the potential of the solution to improve the situation for the organization and the community 10 Proposal: Data Proposal: Research Communication Plan: Present the Information Communication Plan: Internal Audience Communication Plan: External Audience References Meets “Proficient” criteria and decision-making process clearly benefited from a sophisticated ability to interpret raw data and translate it into meaningful information Meets “Proficient” criteria and decision-making process clearly benefited from advanced research skills for the criminal justice field Demonstrates conclusively how the data informed the solution and the decision-making process Discusses the relationship of the data to solution, but fails to conclusively demonstrate that the data informed the solution and the decision-making process Discusses the relationship of the research to the solution, but fails to conclusively demonstrate that the data informed the solution and the decision-making process Presents a communication plan, but it fails to apply best practices to effectively present information to internal or external audiences Does not discuss the relationship of the data to the solution 10 Does not discuss the relationship of the research findings to the solution 10 Meets “Proficient” criteria and plan reflects nuanced understanding of the best practices for effectively communicating with diverse audiences Meets “Proficient” criteria and sample reflects nuanced understanding of the best practices for effectively communicating with diverse audiences Meets “Proficient” criteria and sample reflects nuanced understanding of the best practices for effectively communicating with diverse audiences Meets “Proficient” criteria and selection of source material reflects advanced research skills for the criminal justice field Presents a communication plan that applies best practices to effectively present information to internal and external audiences Does not present a communication plan 10 Includes a sample communication for an internal audience that reflects best practices in the field Includes a sample communication for an internal audience, but it does not fully reflect best practices in the field Does not include a sample communication for an internal audience 10 Includes a sample communication for an external audience that reflects best practices in the field Includes a sample communication for an external audience, but it does not fully reflect best practices in the field Does not include a sample communication for an external audience 10 Includes a complete bibliography of all references, which are all relevant and credible, and follows APA formatting Includes a bibliography but it is incomplete, contains irrelevant or non-credible sources, or does not fully follow APA formatting Does not include a bibliography 5 Demonstrates conclusively how the research findings informed the solution and the decisionmaking process Articulation of Response Submission is free of errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, and organization, and it is presented in a professional and easy to read format Submission has no major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization Submission has major errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that negatively impact readability and articulation of main ideas Submission has critical errors related to citations, grammar, spelling, syntax, or organization that prevent understanding of ideas Total 5 100%
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