Essay #4: Research Paper - Background Research Part 2
San Diego Housing Crises
1. Showley, Roger, and Phillip Molnar . “Solving - San Diego's Housing Shortage - In
Depth.”
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Miller talking about how the people will love the fact that great-density housing, and
development in the retail.
2. Service, City News. “San Diego County Board Of Supervisors Approves $25M For
Affordable Housing
Projects.” KPBS
Public Media, 7 Aug.
2018,
www.kpbs.org/news/2018/aug/07/san-diego-county-board-supervisors-approve25m-aff/.
The author here talking that the county of San Diego will pay 25 Million for building houses
and apartments with a good price for sale and rent.
3. Fudge, Tom. “Report Shows Uptick In San Diego Apartment Construction.” KPBS
Public Media, 24 Aug. 2018, www.kpbs.org/news/2018/aug/24/report-showsuptick-san-diego-apartment-constructi/.
The author in this article talks about building 4089 unite in 2018, to reduce the high cost of
the renting and buying.
RESEARCH PAPER OUTLINE
Thesis:
I.
Reason 1:
a. Evidence:
b. Evidence:
c. Evidence:
II.
Reason 2:
a. Evidence:
b. Evidence:
c. Evidence:
III.
Reason 3:
a. Evidence:
b. Evidence:
c. Evidence:
IV.
Reason 4:
a. Evidence:
b. Evidence:
c. Evidence:
V.
Opposing Viewpoint 1:
a. Concession/refutation
b. Evidence 1:
c. Evidence 2:
VI.
Opposing Viewpoint 2:
a. Concession/rebuttal
b. Evidence1:
c. Evidence 2:
VII. Conclusion
RESEARCH PAPER OUTLINE
Thesis: Although online education has many positive characteristics, it lacks credibility,
provides little or no opportunity for face-to-face interactions with educators or students, and
creates problems with scheduling in real time.
I.
Reason 1: Online education, when compared to traditional schooling, lacks the credibility
needed for job employment.
a. Quote/Paraphrase: Collaborative study between two universities to show the
percentage of students chosen from a research question presented to various
employer’s displays online education picks being the lowest when compared to
100% on campus schooling or even the hybrid schooling of 50% on campus, and
50% online (Western Governors University).
b. Quote/Paraphrase: Similar study was done from another university but different
questions were asked (University of Oklahoma)
II.
Reason 2: Another problem with online education is that is limits social learning due to
the lack of face-to-face interactions with educators and other students.
a. Quote/Paraphrase: Test scores from a research study (Texas A & M)
III.
Reason 3: Alongside the lack of face-to-face interaction with educators and students,
online education also creates problems with scheduling in real time.
a. Quote/Paraphrase: Emailing problems (College Express)
IV.
Opposing Viewpoint 1: The opposing side believes that online schooling is less
expensive compared to traditional schooling.
a. Rebuttal: According to a study, some online schooling is actually more expensive
than traditional education. (Devry University)
V.
Opposing Viewpoint 2: The opposing side believes that online education provides
convenience for many students.
a. Concession/rebuttal: The problems with the statement are that it is not convenient
attempting to contact professors with any problems that arise. (scholarly study)
VII. Conclusion: To conclude, although online education has many positive characteristics, it
lacks credibility and opportunities to interact fact to face.
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John Gray
English 120
Kristin McGregor
12 December 2018
Problems with Online Education
Throughout the twenty-first century, students’ and educators’ view of education
in the United States has dramatically changed. Formal education in the United States,
which began during the mid-seventeenth century and continues up to the present time,
has been consistently taught in a traditional setting (Gelbrich). To condense traditional
education into a few words, it is an education style that emphasizes direct instruction,
includes lectures, covers multiple subjects, and involves students working in a classroom
while all being taught the same material (Gelbrich). In contrast, online educationrecently
began to arise and was introduced in the United States during the 1960s
(Smarty).TheBabson Survey Research Group states that“…over 5.6 million students were
taking at least one online course during the fall 2009 term; an increase of nearly one
million students over the number reported the previous year[…]”(Allen andSeaman).
Therefore, in the United States there is an increasing amount of students beginning to
take online courses.However, there are still many problems with online education that
must be resolved before online education can be equal in value compared to traditional
schooling. Although online education has many positive characteristics, it lacks
credibility, provides little or no opportunities for social learning with educators or
students, and creates problems with scheduling in real time.
Online education, when compared to traditional schooling, lacks the credibility
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needed for job employment. In 2013, competition is rising in the work force and
obtaining a degree is vital for one’s success. The question that seems to surface is
whether a degree obtained at an online institution is credible or not. To answer the
question, many universities have completed collaborative studies with many employers
on the issue of online education’s credibility. For example, Calvin D. Fogle, of Western
Governors University, and Devonda Elliott, Doctoral Candidate of University of the
Rockies, did a collaborative research study comparing graduates from primarily online
universities to graduates from non-online universities. The research question was “In
your perception, which candidate would you hire? (All candidates possess equivalent
experience and degree) (100% On-Campus, 100% Online, or Hybrid (50% Online, 50%
On-Campus)” (Fogleand Devonda). Of the results, just over half, 50.1%, sided with the
100% on-campus, 36.5% sided with the hybrid, and only 12.6% sided with the 100%
online (Fogle and Devonda). These facts begin to show how many employers do not have
enough trust in the online schooling system and view this form of education as noncredible. In addition, the University of Oklahoma did a research study in 2006, and each
employer was asked to choose between two hypothetical applicants. The first applicant
had an online degreeand the second applicant had a traditional degree; the candidate with
the traditional degree was chosen by 96% of respondents (Seibold). Thus, to employers,
online education is not comparable to a traditional on-campus education or degree.
Another problem with online education is that it limits social learning due to the
lack of face-to-face interactions with educators and other students. To illustrate, Texas
A&M University-Commerce did a study including females and male students to compare
online test scores with face-to-face live interaction test scores. The total number of
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students involved was 234, and the course of study was a junior-level business economics
course. After gathering all of the facts, Texas A&M University stated in their conclusion
that “When comparing online and face-to-face scores overall, without taking into
consideration gender, live face-to-face course, students scored significantly better than
online students” (Flanagan). This is a clear example of how a student’s success can be
affected by the lack of face-to-face interactions with educators. Furthermore, many
students feel that taking classes online is much easier because they can work at their own
pace and because ofits convenience. This is not the case because without the opportunity
to interact socially with other students and educators as in a traditional or conventional
classroom setting, one must read the lectures on one’s own instead of simply taking notes
in a face-to-face interaction. In addition, while moving through an academic career, some
students may have questions that need answers or clarification for problems that cannot
be solved without seeking others’ help. This is not an option for students taking an online
class, and there are no students to lean on in class to answer these questions. Contacting a
professor is near impossible when taking an online class, and, depending on the class
size, it may not even be an option.
Alongside the lack of face-to-face interaction with educators and students, online
education also creates problems with scheduling in real time. For instance, students need
to contact professors by email to inform them that in the coming weekthey will be going
on a business trip and now desire to reschedule an exam. However, the professor’s reply
to the email maybe two days late. The time has already passed and the answer is useless
now. As another example, in the article “The Pros and Cons of an Online College
Education”, it states, “When you have a question, you're trapped waiting for answers via
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e-mail or student forums” (Poisse). Therefore, the difficulty of contacting a professor is
being replaced with student forums that essentially do not add up to the quality of direct
contact with an instructor. This begins to create problems with scheduling within the
deadlines of online courses. As another example, Jon Kolko in the article “Problems with
Online Learning” states, “When working through a problem in real-time, the content acts
as the mediator between teacher and student”. Thus, when problems or questions arise,
the professors lean toward a source of content and never give the opportunity for an easy
line of communication, disrupting the students’ scheduling in real time.
The opposing side believes that online education provides convenience for many
students’and is less expensive compared to traditional schooling. By students having the
opportunity to study in their home or anywherethey can connect to the Internet, it helps
the students by eliminating the stress of driving to certain locations, worrying about being
late or on time, and sitting in classrooms for long periods of time. To illustrate, Keystone
University said, during an interview“Online courses are delivered over the Internet and
can be accessed from a computer with a Web browser (ex. Internet Explorer)” (“Online
Learning Defined”). Furthermore, all classes can be accessed through the Internetwithout
driving to an on-campus school. Likewise, because online education does not have large
fees from maintaining a large campus and its classrooms, it is able to pass the savings
onto students of all ages. For example, North Central University states, “…because an
online university does not have the fees of maintaining a large campus and its
classrooms, it is able to pass the savings onto students of all ages” (“Online Education
Versus”). Hence, students are able to save money compared to a traditional school where
all of the original fees remain. While these statements are true, when analyzed in depth
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many problems begin to surface. To illustrate, as already explained, students have littleto-no communication with a professorwhile taking an online course. Throughout the
semester or even the school year, one will definitely come to a point where direct
connection between student and teacher is necessary. Fitting this into a busy instructor’s
schedule is anything but convenient. Secondly, while money can be saved with online
education, having to provide one’s own technology, for example, a laptop or desktop
computer, to participate in an Internet coursecan be costly. There are a few online
institutions that are very expensive. For instance, Devry University ranks as one of the
most expensive online schooling programs and is priced at 609 dollars per semester credit
hour (Schuessler). Depending on the amount of classes one chooses to take, this can add
up quickly and be just as expensive as a traditional school, if not more so.
Henceforth, there are some solutions to these problems that can improve the
quality and efficiency of online education, bettering it for many current students and the
ones to come. One solutioncould be for online institutions to create large conference
meetings or gatherings via online programs that could accompany many students at one
time; this provides the perfect opportunity for questions and answers from professor to
student with the additional convenience of not having to traveling to the campus and
being able to broadcast worldwide. Although there are already programs created that can
create conference meetings, they cannot accompany large groups of students without
malfunctioning. As a result, if this was created by the online universities or institutions, it
would attract students looking to apply and possibly entice universities to all allow online
degrees to be obtained, thus making online education extremely credible and equal to
traditional residential education. By attempting to solve these minor issues, online
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education would soon be the new form of education due to the Internet’s massive
amounts of influence in the twenty-first century.
To conclude, although online education has many positive characteristics, it lacks
many things, including credibility and face-to-face interactions, andits riddled with
scheduling problems. Online education has come far, but it must continue to grow and
repair its flaws before it is compared side-by-side with accredited universities. Many
employers still do not see the two types of education as equal. Another one of the major
points is that without face-to-face interactions, students tend to struggle a lot and must be
very independent workers, be well-organized, and require very little assistance when
completing new material. Without being able to reach out to the professor and being
limited to a student forum, students have difficulty finding proper information.
Lastly,real-time scheduling is completely out of the question due to limited contact with
theinstructors via email.In addition, time scheduling is just too difficult when relying
solely on an email that may not be answered. As can be seen, online education has many
drawbacks or negatives and must be improved. Although there are many positive claims
about online education, in fact it still remains that traditional or conventional education
gives students the best opportunity for success in the United States, and until changes are
made, continuing to attend school on-campus is a student’s best options. Technology is
always improving and growing in new directions to better the world and provide
opportunities that were never imagined, but with the new technologies comes the
unknown, and until the unknowns of online education are discovered, it will lack the
consistency of a traditional brick and mortar school.
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1.
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4.
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Depth.”
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Service, City News. “San Diego County Board Of Supervisors Approves $25M For
Affordable
Housing
Projects.”
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2018,
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Fudge, Tom. “Report Shows Uptick In San Diego Apartment Construction.” KPBS Public
Media, 24 Aug. 2018, www.kpbs.org/news/2018/aug/24/report-shows-uptick-san-diegoapartment-constructi/.
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