Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 English 300: Advanced Composition Comparison and Contrast Prewriting Marife, you have chosen a very interesting book/movie combination to work with. You must focus on the differences between the two works in terms of plot, character, setting, or theme. For example, there is a 14 year gap between the book and the movie, which is huge in terms of technology. Are there uses of technology in the movie that aren’t in the book and if so how do those uses change the story? Be sure to review these textbook references and watch the video lecture related to this lesson before beginning your revisions. I have also added some textbook references in the rubric. Textbook Chapter 16: “Comparison and Contrast: Showing Similarities and Differences” Study Guide Lesson 7: “Comparison and Contrast: Showing Similarities and Differences” Video Lecture “Using Comparison and Contrast Analyzing a Novel” http://videos.pennfoster.com/index.html?vid=4644724424001 As noted in your previous review, there are some problems with word usage and sentence construction. I strongly urge you to check out our Writer’s Block writing center at http://pflibrary.pennfoster.edu/writersblock. It would also be very helpful for you to contact the school or one of our tutors at http://pflibrary.pennfoster.edu/writersblock/tutoring. Regards, Instructor Penn Foster Pass Thesis, Ideas, and Content -The thesis makes a focused claim that can be sustained in a longer essay. -The outline/organizer provides a close reading of book and film using comparison and contrast patterns of development. -The main points analyze the significance of the changes between book and film. There is little analysis of the differences between the book and the film and too much discussion of similarities. As noted in your previous review, it is not enough to merely state the differences; you must show how these differences affect the audience’s perception of plot, character, setting, or theme. Explore the work from at least three of these literary elements. Be sure to review the lessons and the following textbook resources related to this assignment before beginning your revisions. Return X Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Textbook: Chapter 6: “Developing and Supporting a Thesis,” with special attention to “Writing an Effective Thesis Statement” on pp. 122-123) Exam # 500505 Chapter 19: “Cause and Effect: Using Reasons and Results to Explain” “Supporting Your Thesis Statement with Evidence” (pp. 125-138) “Including Supporting Details” (pp. 164-169) Part 5: “Writing with Sources” Organization -Ideas are logically arranged and help move paper forward. -Each proposed main point is focused on one aspect of the topic and helps support the thesis statement. The outline basically rehashes the plot. X Bibliography -Properly formatted using MLA guidelines. -Provided six potential outside sources for research. While you have listed sources, most are reviews of the movie and the book. None of the information from these sources is cited in the outline. You must use your sources to support your claim. X Style and Voice -Maintains a consistent point of view on topic -Proposed evidence will engage readers’ interest in the topic. Conventions -The outline/organizer has been spell-checked and proofread to check for errors in word choice and typos. -The paper is reasonably free of errors that interfere with a reader’s ability to understand the content. As noted in your previous review, there are many instances of incorrect word usage and sentence structure. X Format -The prewrite is developed as an outline or graphic organizer. - It includes all required information in a properly formatted header. Exam Number: Grade: Date: Instructor: X X IMPORTANT NOTICE Along the right-hand side of your evaluated exam, you should see marginal or "bubble" comments from your instructor. You should also see a series of Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 highlighted numbers in the evaluation chart identifying the rating you earned on each trait. If you don't see this feedback, click on the "View" tab and "Print Layout" or click on "Review" and the option "Final Showing Markup." If you still cannot see the feedback, please contact the school for the complete evaluation. Comparison and Contrast on Spinning Man Novel and Spinning Man Film Introduction The novel is written by author George Harrar where he gives a psychological mystery about the college professor and the distortions of a regional high school cheerleader. The professor became a prime suspect when a young woman went missing. It happened that a female student by name Joyce went missing and Evan’s other off-campus alliance made his wife question his alibi. Commented [EJ1]: You have made a positive change in moving a summary of the plot to your introduction. You can further reduce the space you spend discussing the plot by assuming that the reader knows the plot of both the story and the movie. Use just the first paragraph of this draft and be sure to include information on when the book was published and the year the movie was released to help the reader place the book. There is a 14 year gap, which is huge in terms of technology….what changed between the book and the movie? You can also briefly discuss the popularity of both the book and the movie. Detectives Malloy got enough reason to be cautious when crucial clue makes Evan the bloom pseudo in Joyce desertion. The professor was pulled over by the detective on one evening on his way home from the supermarket with his twin sons. Professor was hauled in for interrogation and learned that a car much like his was spotted at the park where Joyce Bonner got disappeared. The novel narrates that the professor was released after questions, but damning Commented [EJ2]: Delete this paragraph and the ones that follow as you are going into too much detail in explaining the plot. Instead, focus on getting to your thesis statement. Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 circumstances evidence continues to file up. Later on, police impounded the professor car and found evidence that was just a passenger. Besides, the girl had a crush on Birch thus there were speculations that there was a possible affair between them. The behavior is fueled by the handsome professor systematic fluctuation manner with young women. The wife of professor treated the incidence with an icy calm but later started to have doubts. The wife went to the extent of asking the two sons about their park visit during the day of the murder. A sharp dialogue was cracked due to the interactions of police detectives, the professor, and the wife. Thesis Statement Both the novel and film have similar characters. The film gives overview of the novel in real sense. The novel illustrates how Evan is capable of covering up another more important Commented [EJ3]: You have some ideas you can work with but there is no clear path to a claim about the differences between the book and the movie. What changes occur in the plot? Are characters portrayed differently? Has the setting changed? Is the overall theme or message of the movie different than that of the book because of these changes? end. From the film, observed that material plays another more intelligence that we might expect. Evan creates a philosophical debate which subtly transforms into a hypothetical interrogation that is anything but theoretical. Spinning Man Novel Similarities and Differences I. The Spinning Man novel and film contains the detective Malloy who is on the bin and glancing for Joyce murderer. The professor made it clarion to the people that he would not sleep with the student beside the flatland rupture of efficient conscience. In the film, we see the Commented [EJ4]: Focus on the differences between the two works. Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 professor gets out of a hardware store picking up a mouse trap which is continuing argument all through the unified movie. II. The professor had an incident with a woman working at the store right there in the lane. Professor got himself hauled into the police apartments after he arrived home since he refused to allow his car to be searched. Both the novel and the film has the stimulations since they fixture how professor discussed the details of zoos paradox in his lectures. III. The book states that the caps of language uncover the alleged states of the truth. It was absurd for the professor to tell the truth. He was able to broadcast the truth which he could discern. I could understand the movie since I concentrated on the relativism that the professor was exposing. The film brought the idle truth since it used to be aloof for the theologians and philosophers to deliberate (George Harrar, 2004). IV. The film has used the dossier to find the true and false allotment. Both the novel and film brings a conversation between Anna and professor where they discovered Wallenstein and his capacity to contend the curbs of truth all along the day. The professor didn’t seem by the morality and the fact he was supporting for. Anna had a different perspective which seemed utterly duplicators and wrong professor talks of how the professor ascribes to his realistic vantage which meant he could easily give himself something of a pass (George Harrar, 2004). V. There is a similarity in the novel and the film how Ellen narrates how she found a professor having sex with a student in his office. There has been a sort of inappropriateness which has been going on between the students on the previous semester. Anna was the one making a move to have an affair with the professor. But the novel and film don’t give clear Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 indication that the professor allowed it to continue forward. We see that Evan was the bloke that daydreams of women on shops. VI. Professor had lost his previous college, and now he gets back to such behaviors. I see that it was because of predictions that the professor efficacy just has intentionally killed Joyce. Both the novel and the film continues to give evidence that Evan’s is Joyce criminal. I get competency and a counterproductive cord about a lost Bonny and some mouse traps. The film shows how the professor goes to get a cordial trap which conclusively doesn’t endeavor. The professor gets a few of the formal kind which he purchases as the rat traps (George Harrar, 2004). VII. Zelda Bunner goes missing when the professor forgets to close the bonny hutch door. The novel narrates how Evan disposes of the Bonny body and then helps Zelda to put up missing Bonny posters which I see it done in the film. At the end of the novel. We learn many calumniator things to the case. It illustrates that the camp mentor had said that the professor was forty minutes late to get his daughter. Malloy gets into the car of professor and gets a hair from Joyce in the back seat. VIII. More so, Zelda found her limb balm. The professor decides to get a lawyer, but the lawyer is convinced that Evan is suspect. In both novel and the film, there are similarities whereby Ellen is offering haunt on the news insurance of Joyce assassination. We see Ellen driving smooth down to the shore where Joyce was killed. The location is said to be dappled by the detective Malloy. Detective Malloy brought the philosophical and the investigation to an end where backs Evan’s threat to his students to write an essay clarifying how we know the chair endure. Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com IX. Exam # 500505 At the end of the novel, we see Ellen and Evan go to an aptitude party where they end up arguing mid-party. Ellen leaves Evan in the room where he started wandering off the acreage and begins consuming even more. There are many women faces which are extending and assemble into each other. We see Evan hooking up with Anna in a car, and when they go out, Anna tells Evan she loves him. Evan breeze Anna and assaults her out of the car where she hits the assault. At the middle of the novel and the film, we see Evan waking into detective Malloy office to confess. Evan seems to be confused, but he is confident he killed her. Evan accidentally shoved Joyce and hit her head which brought to his death. Detective Malloy didn’t respond since there were no signs of sexual seduction. We see that the neck and arms of Joyce were broken from the fall in the nearby cliff. X. In the film, Pearce acts as the professor. The film has hysterical fullness seeing that it signals to mind as the best film compared to the emotions in the novel. The film twist on its fulfilled until reaching a battling denouement. The spinning man aspect often seems like an afterthought. The entire film is attractively captured acting adumbration of dismal for use by the cinematographer. The film is exploring a false confession syndrome. There is an inevitable cat, and mouse game between the agent and his aim befalls which is seemingly strange affectionate to Evan predicament as they enlist in scholarly philosophical arguments. XI. The professor finds himself coping with honest feeling toward espousal younger woman which involved a hardware store clerk about who he envisions and a student whose innovations coffee he keeps dodging. Clark Gregg is hired as the lawyer where he finds his equivocation and hatred toward the police a matter of growing burden. The spinning man lacks the continuity both to make its cerebral motifs which fully reverberate and its enigma casually Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 gratifying. The film brings a shame because its assertion assuredly holds the proposition of being alluring. XII. Matthew Aldrich plays a screenplay which works best not on its artificial attitude but fairly the quiet confrontation between cop and suspect in which the men ardent agility is on ample array. The performance of Pearce had an admirable intensity and also Rosanna underplays smartly which kept us quelling about Malloy’s real feeling. Evan, the professor, had a severe memory which was never entirely explained (CY, 2017). XIII. Evan sins a rationalization of his mental state and for his lying out of his lectures on the philosophy of language. The behavior of Evan was an example of male hegemony over women everywhere. The novel and the film illustrates very well that Evan had affairs. He spent his time with students which makes it questionable in the assertion. Memories are just like a construct in the Spinning Man just like the amusement of facts for Malloy’s likely assassination case. The film and movie gave the irresponsible behavior of men who don’t seem to remember what he had for lunch that day. He couldn’t even remember a bootleg incident whose sodded details would be best kept locked away from his county murder. The equivocation of anecdotal coherence became ho-hum for a while which it wasn’t defined clearly (Owen Greiberman, 2018). XIV. In the theory of the movie, we try to consider how Evan makes in his attempts to remember whether or not he murdered a high school student. As an individual, I would imagine killing someone would be a memorable life event. The film and the novel differ on how Evan is stuck in his philosophical thinking that he convinces himself that the absence of a memory of killing a girl is somehow evidence that he might have done the foul indeed. Evan is very hopeful Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 on the philosophical gymnastic which will confound the cops investigating the girl’s disappearance. Evan seems to poses some mental condition that makes him forget things. The film is very accurate as it represents the experience and shows themes about truth, memory, reality, and deception (Jacob Knight, 2018). XV. According to the film, the detective sees no signs of foul play but isn’t going to risk anything by assuming she ran away. Evan put understated terms since he is a person of interest. Evan is a liar and suspects that his falsehood would extend to his participation in a crime. The accident which happened involving some oversized mousetraps and his daughter's pet rabbit makes us think that he could never cover up the death of a Bonny (Mark Dujsik, 2018). Conclusion In conclusion we see how the professor is very defensive since he is dubious if he has all to bury which lead him to debris a search of his car and become in interrogation rooms. The wife of Evan knew about his affair which caused them to advance on perhaps more than one incident. Every time I believed that Malloy’s was on the fringe of a boost. The film makes maneuver along at a durable clip whereby Pearce is actively engaged with the heavy access to telling a differently definite assassination enigma. There is a unique and interesting comparison between the film and the move of the Spinning Man. Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY Mark Dujsik. Mark Reviews Movies: SPINNING MAN, 05 April 2018 The article gives clear overview the film Spinning Man. The film assumes to be freight in such ponderous motif on how memories can either be imagined. Owen Greiberman. ‘Spinning Man’ Review: Guy Pearce as a Suspect Who Looks Guilty as Sin – Variety, 04 April 2018 This article has helped me to figure out how the future will be in perceptive of culture. Eva behavior portrays me should respect young ladies. CY. The Truly Confounding Spinning Man Deconstructed and Explained - Taylor Holmes Inc. (2017). The article explains the ending of the movie. I used to article to understand the ending in deep. The ending show how Evan was defensive in the case of murder. George Harrar. The Spinning Man, 03 February 2004 Marife Holmes # 22700036 23035 Harper Ave. Apt B Port Charlotte, FL 33980 feholmes37@gmail.com Exam # 500505 The novel has helped me get the perspective of how life of truth could change life of someone. George Harrar. Spinning Man (2018) – YouTube, 07 September 2017 The film has shown me clear picture of how professor was being harassed. The film links to life of professor and girl who was missing. Jacob Knight. SPINNING MAN Review: He’s A Goner, Girl | Birth.Movies.Death. 06 April 2018. The article helped me to know the popularity of the Spinning Man film. The review is good as it discusses how the movie is educative and the behaviors of the characters. Comparison and Contrast on Spinning Man Novel and Spinning Man Film Introduction The novel is written by author George Harrar and was published in February 3rd 2004. George Harrar gives a psychological mystery about the college professor and the distortions of a regional high school cheerleader. The professor became a prime suspect when a young woman went missing. It happened that a female student by name Joyce went missing and Evan’s other offcampus alliance made his wife question his alibi. Thesis Statement Both the novel and film have similar characters. The film gives over the overview of the novel in real sense. The novel illustrates how Evan is capable of covering up another more important end. From the film, I observe that material plays another more intelligence that we might expect. Evan creates a philosophical debate which subtly transforms into a hypothetical interrogation that is anything but theoretical. Spinning Man Novel Differences I. The Spinning Man novel and film contains the detective Malloy who is on the bin and glancing for Joyce murderer. The professor made it clarion to the people that he would not sleep with the student beside the flatland rupture of efficient conscience. In the film, we see the professor gets out of a hardware store picking up a murine trap which is continuing argument all through the unified movie. II. The professor had an incident with a woman working at the store right there in the lane. Professor got himself hauled into the police apartments after he arrived home since he refused to allow his Volvo to be searched. Both the novel and the film has the stimulations since they fixture how professor discussed the details of zoos paradox in his lectures. III. The book states that the caps of language uncover the alleged states of the truth. It was absurd for the professor to tell the truth. He was able to broadcast the truth which he could discern. I could understand the movie since I concentrated on the relativism that the professor was exposing. The film brought the idle truth since it used to be aloof for the theologians and philosophers to deliberate (George Harrar, 2004). Detectives Malloy got enough reason to be cautious when crucial clue makes Evan the bloom pseudo in Joyce desertion. The professor was pulled over by the detective on one evening on his way home from the supermarket with his twin sons. Professor was hauled in for interrogation and learned that a car much like his was spotted at the park where Joyce Bonner got disappeared. The novel narrates that the professor was released after questions, but damning circumstances evidence continues to file up. Later on, police impounded the professor car and found evidence that was just a passenger. IV. The film has used the dossier to find the true and false allotment. Both the novel and film brings a conversation between Anna and professor where they discovered Wallenstein and his capacity to contend the curbs of truth all along the day. The professor didn’t seem by the morality and the fact he was supporting for. Anna had a different perspective which seemed utterly duplicators and wrong professor talks of how the professor ascribes to his realistic vantage which meant he could easily give himself something of a pass (George Harrar, 2004). V. There is a similarity in the novel and the film how Ellen narrates how she found a professor having sex with a student in his office. There has been a sort of inappropriateness which has been going on between the students on the previous semester. Anna was the one making a move to have an affair with the professor. But the novel and film don’t give clear indication that the professor allowed it to continue forward. We see that Evan was the bloke that daydreams of women on shops. VI. Professor had lost his previous college, and now he gets back to such behaviors. I see that it was because of predictions that the professor efficacy just has intentionally killed Joyce. Both the novel and the film continues to give evidence that Evan’s is Joyce criminal. I get competency and a counterproductive cord about a lost Bonny and some mouse traps. The film shows how the professor goes to get a cordial trap which conclusively doesn’t endeavor. The professor gets a few of the formal kind which he purchases as the rat traps (George Harrar, 2004). Besides, the girl had a crush on Birch thus there were speculations that there was a possible affair between them. The behavior is fueled by the handsome professor systematic fluctuation manner with young women. The wife of professor treated the incidence with an icy calm but later started to have doubts. The wife went to the extent of asking the two sons about their park visit during the day of the murder. A sharp dialogue was cracked due to the interactions of police detectives, the professor, and the wife. VII. Zelda Bunner goes missing when the professor forgets to close the bonny hutch door. The novel narrates how Evan disposes of the Bonny body and then helps Zelda to put up missing Bonny posters which I see it done in the film. At the end of the novel, we learn many calumniator things to the case. It illustrates that the camp mentor had said that the professor was forty minutes late to get his daughter. Malloy gets into the car of professor and gets a hair from Joyce in the back seat. VIII. More so, Zelda found her limb balm. The professor decides to get a lawyer, but the lawyer is convinced that Evan is a suspect. In both novel and the film, there are similarities whereby Ellen is offering haunt on the news insurance of Joyce assassination. We see Ellen driving smooth down to the shore where Joyce was killed. The location is said to be dappled by the detective Malloy. Detective Malloy brought the philosophical and the investigation to an end where backs Evan’s threat to his students to write an essay clarifying how we know the chair endure. IX. At the end of the novel, we see Ellen and Evan go to an aptitude party where they end up arguing mid-party. Ellen leaves Evan in the room where he started wandering off the acreage and begins consuming even more. There are many women faces which are extending and assemble into each other. We see Evan hooking up with Anna in a car, and when they go out, Anna tells Evan she loves him. Evan breeze Anna and assaults her out of the car where she hits the assault. At the middle of the novel and the film, we see Evan waking into detective Malloy office to confess. Evan seems to be confused, but he is confident he killed her. Evan accidentally shoved Joyce and hit her head which brought to his death. Detective Malloy didn’t respond since there were no signs of sexual seduction. We see that the neck and arms of Joyce were broken from the fall in the nearby cliff. X. In the film, Pearce acts as the professor. The film has hysterical fullness seeing that it signals to mind as the best film compared to the emotions in the novel. The film twist on its fulfilled until reaching a battling denouement. The spinning man aspect often seems like an afterthought. The entire film is attractively captured acting adumbration of dismal for use by the cinematographer. The film is exploring a false confession syndrome. There is an inevitable cat, and mouse game between the agent and his aim befalls which is seemingly strange affectionate to Evan predicament as they enlist in scholarly philosophical arguments. XI. The professor finds himself coping with honest feeling toward espousal younger woman which involved a hardware store clerk about who he envisions and a student whose innovations coffee he keeps dodging. Clark Gregg is hired as the lawyer where he finds his equivocation and hatred toward the police a matter of growing burden. The spinning man lacks the continuity both to make its cerebral motifs which fully reverberate and its enigma casually gratifying. The film brings a shame because its assertion assuredly holds the proposition of being alluring. XII. Matthew Aldrich plays a screenplay which works best not on its artificial attitude but fairly the quiet confrontation between cop and suspect in which the men ardent agility is on ample array. The performance of Pearce had an admirable intensity and also Rosanna underplays smartly which kept us quelling about Malloy’s real feeling. Evan, the professor, had a severe memory which was never entirely explained (CY, 2017). XIII. Evan sins a rationalization of his mental state and for his lying out of his lectures on the philosophy of language. The behavior of Evan was an example of male hegemony over women everywhere. The novel and the film illustrates very well that Evan had affairs. He spent his time with students which makes it questionable in the assertion. Memories are just like a construct in the Spinning Man just like the amusement of facts for Malloy’s likely assassination case. The film and movie gave the irresponsible behavior of men who don’t seem to remember what he had for lunch that day. He couldn’t even remember a bootleg incident whose sodded details would be best kept locked away from his county murder. The equivocation of anecdotal coherence became ho-hum for a while which it wasn’t defined clearly (Owen Greiberman, 2018). XIV. In the theory of the movie, we try to consider how Evan makes in his attempts to remember whether or not he murdered a high school student. As an individual, I would imagine killing someone would be a memorable life event. The film and the novel differ on how Evan is stuck in his philosophical thinking that he convinces himself that the absence of a memory of killing a girl is somehow evidence that he might have done the foul indeed. Evan is very hopeful on the philosophical gymnastic which will confound the cops investigating the girl’s disappearance. Evan seems to poses some mental condition that makes him forget things. The film is very accurate as it represents the experience and shows themes about truth, memory, reality, and deception (Jacob Knight, 2018). XV. According to the film, the detective sees no signs of foul play but isn’t going to risk anything by assuming she ran away. Evan put understated terms since he is a person of interest. Evan is a liar and suspects that his falsehood would extend to his participation in a crime. The accident which happened involving some oversized mousetraps and his daughter's pet rabbit makes us think that he could never cover up the death of a Bonny (Mark Dujsik, 2018). Conclusion In conclusion we see how the professor is very defensive since he is dubious if he has all to bury which lead him to debris a search of his car and become in interrogation rooms. The wife of Evan knew about his affair which caused them to advance on perhaps more than one incident. Every time I believed that Malloy’s was on the fringe of a boost. The film makes maneuver along at a durable clip whereby Pearce is actively engaged with the heavy access to telling a differently definite assassination enigma. There is a unique and interesting comparison between the film and the move of the Spinning Man. ANNOTATED BIBLIOGRAPHY Mark Dujsik. Mark Reviews Movies: SPINNING MAN, 05 April 2018 The article gives clear overview the film Spinning Man. The film assumes to be freight in such ponderous motif on how memories can either be imagined. Owen Greiberman. ‘Spinning Man’ Review: Guy Pearce as a Suspect Who Looks Guilty as Sin – Variety, 04 April 2018 This article has helped me to figure out how the future will be in perceptive of culture. Eva behavior portrays me should respect young ladies. CY. The Truly Confounding Spinning Man Deconstructed and Explained - Taylor Holmes Inc. (2017). The article explains the ending of the movie. I used to article to understand the ending in deep. The ending show how Evan was defensive in the case of murder. George Harrar. The Spinning Man, 03 February 2004 The novel has helped me get the perspective of how life of truth could change life of someone. George Harrar. Spinning Man (2018) – YouTube, 07 September 2017 The film has shown me clear picture of how professor was being harassed. The film links to life of professor and girl who was missing. Jacob Knight. SPINNING MAN Review: He’s A Goner, Girl | Birth.Movies.Death. 06 April 2018. The article helped me to know the popularity of the Spinning Man film. The review is good as it discusses how the movie is educative and the behaviors of the characters.