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Similarity:0% exclude quoted exclude bibliography download refresh print mode: Fitness centers are the way of the new age! I strongly believe that River View Plaza needs a fitness center for employees to work out. Healthy fit people produce better quality work, are much happier at work, and miss less days then people who are not fit. Having this center will have people wanting to come and work for the businesses at this plaza. River View Plaza should also offer this for public use, by having a membership at a competitive price. This fitness center will pay for itself, and generate profit for the building. This will benefit all the businesses and ones to come in the future. Employees will be more productive and more motivated at work, causing much better profit to business owners.After submitting my paper to Write Point I noticed it says I have a run on sentence. This is how the sentence is written. "This fitness center will pay for itself, and generate profit for the building." Truthfully I still do not understand why, maybe I need to remove the comma. There is also feedback explaining that "in the future" is redundant. Maybe this is not excepted in academic writing. This fe

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