COM 220 Improving sentence variety completed

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531. Improving sentence variety completedTotal score: 10 out of 10, 100%Top of Form1. Everyone obviously knows Disney. Disney is the biggest name in children's home entertainment. Obviously everyone knows that Disney is the biggest name in children's home entertainment.Obviously, everyone knows that Disney is the biggest name in children's home entertainment.1 out of 1Correct. The adverb Obviously has been moved to the beginning of the combined sentence to provide greater variety and is followed by a comma. 2. You may not know that the second-biggest name is Olsen. Olsen is a familiar name to many girls between the ages of eight and twelve. You may not know that the second-biggest name is Olsen, which is a familiar name to many girls between the ages of eight and twelve.You may not know that the second-biggest name is Olsen which is a familiar name to many girls between the ages of eight and twelve.1 out of 1Correct. The two sentences have been joined using an adjective clause that is not essential to the meaning of the sentence and is therefore set off by a comma. 3. Mary-Kate and Ashley Olsen dominate the live-action children's video market. This marke

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