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Axia College MaterialAppendix DE-mail EtiquetteXCOM/285June 23, 2011Jarod HoldrenRead the following e-mails. For each e-mail:Describe any content and formatting errors found. Determine if the content is appropriate for a workplace setting. If it is, explain why. If not, identify the errors made and rewrite the e-mail, to be appropriate.E-mail OneTo: TomSubject line: Talent ReallocationTom,This e-mail is in reference to the two employees who are going to be terminated Friday. We have determined that they are Nicole Stone and Lorenzo Torres. As we discussed yesterday, their performances are not on par with those of other employees in the accounting department; interventions with these employees have not been successful in helping them improve their performance. Let's plan to meet with them individually in the conference room between 3:00 and 4:00 p.m.Thanks,Andrea Responses to questions 1 and 2.This email uses 10 point and not 12 point. I think the subject line is incorrect for the information being discussed. The subject states "Talent Reallocation" but the employees are being terminated, not reallocated. There should be a space between the closing Thanks, and Andrea's name.I do not believe the content is appropriate in the business setting. First of all, the names of the employees should not have been mentioned in the email or the fact the any terminations were going to take place. What if Andrea had mistakenly put the wrong email address and

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