. Writing clarity

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. The store will stay open later during the holiday season. The store will stock a variety of seasonal merchandise. The store will have many discounts available for holiday shoppers.

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. The store will stay open later during the holiday season. The store will stock a variety of seasonal merchandise.The store will have many discounts available for holiday shoppers.When revising the paragraph above, the writer should address which of the following?A. Sentence fluencyB. PunctuationC. Paragraph organizationD. Writing clarityC. Paragraph organization. The sentence fluency is OK. The sentences make sense and sound pretty good. The punctuation is correct and the writing is clear. If the paragraph were reorganized like this, it would make more sense:The store will stay open later during the holiday season. It will stock a variety of seasonal merchandise and will offer many discounts.You shouldn't start every sentence with the "The store....". You don't want to use the phrase "To To expedite holiday shoppers....", because the shoppers aren't being expedited. People aren't expedited. Using it that way would mean that you want to get the shoppers themselves in and out of the store as fast as possible, without regard to their purchases. It refers to moving them as quickly as possible. You could start with "To expedite holiday shopping....", however, that still refers to the speed of shopping, not the ease. Using a fancy word is not always the best writing. If used incorrectly, it confuses the meaning.2. Cell PhonesCellular Plan 1550 minutes for $89/month Includes unlimited long distance, nights & weekends, & 500 text messages.Cellula

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